Frozen Adventures, Simmily and Metaphor, short story.

Today we worked on our Simmilys and Metaphors by writing a short story, here are the Rules ( so that you would like to try it yourself )

Rules

You must write a story for a local magazine. The story’s title must be ‘Frozen Adventures’. You must write about your journey to a snowy and cold climate.  Write this story in a new google doc and post it on your blog when complete.

You must include:

• Descriptive detail
• 2-3 Metaphors
• 2-3 Similes
• Introduction and Conclusion
• 3-4 Paragraphs

Now i will show you what I did.

#*Start*#

Woosh, two boys sled around the giant mammoth like icey hills next to them was two girls one on skis and the other on a snowboard, they were nearing a  league and made a sudden stop making tiny ice cubes of frozen water fly from beneath their feet, before falling down into the ocean of shining snow and ice.

“How will we get to the group now” one of the boys sighed as they took off their helmet, it was showing his perfect styled brown hair and his tan skin was noticeable against the vidirent white snow, the other boy just sighed and the girls nodded their head in agreeance.  

“Over there” one of the girls said, pointing at a slop that looked like the back of a giraffe's neck. The boys looked worried but still went down, as they were sledding down the wind started to rap around their faces like frozen hands, and flakes of dandruff like snow flicked onto their faces and bodys. They finally came to a stop and meet up with the rest of the school to head home. In the and they still talk about the fun Frozen adventure they went on till Today.